CHAPTER #3

Hello! Its Friday finally, I've been very eager to post this one because we are finally getting to start the actual story! *happy dance* So yay! I though I might mention a friend of mines blog. I have to say I do in fact love it and how the fourth wall is literally nonexistent in it. But that just makes it all the better, especially since it means this friend of mine will stop being so glum.;) Here is the blog address so you can just click on it and visit.  http://constancethewriter.blogspot.com/2014/07/theo-space-man.html?spref=fb
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Chapter #3

We fell and fell; Heir laughed his silly little laugh while holding onto his bowler hat. My hair floated up as we fell and I laughed with Heir feeling cheerful and carefree. My cheeks grew red when he looked at me and his eyes and freckled nose scrunched up in a big silly smile. I fell with his hand in mine through the somehow lit up hole, the whole time laughing and smiling. I had not a care in the world when falling down that hole, and down we went. We landed softly on a pile of soft pillows just when I was getting used to the idea of falling forever. Heir got up first straightening his bowler hat even though it looked fine to me. He cleared his throat and held a purple gloved hand out to me smiling his silly smile. I took it feeling myself blush, my skirt was everywhere -as it should be after falling down an everlasting hole to another world and landing on a pile of pillows. I mean Alice, did you really think you would be finely groomed after all that?- and it was rather embarrassing. He smiled his little silly smile and said while spreading his arms,” Welcome, to Underland Alice White Rabbit!”

Now, you might expect that Underland would be like wonderland since it is quite similar sounding. But I will say this, Underland was nothing like Wonderland. –Alice, Heir literally said that Underland was completely different from Wonderland.-  Wonderland, as I had imagined it, would be colorful and crazy with life. But Underland was completely different. Sure, there was life around, and maybe they were crazy, but this place was unbelievably colorful. And not normal colors either-Well, normal colors, but not normal places for them to be-, there was a blue leafed tree that leaves where completely round. Like a circle, a perfect circle. The leaves might have been a O.C.D’s dream, but the rest of underland would be their nightmare. It was disorganized, hectic, and full of bustling life. I smiled and laughed gently, Heir said, “Quite impressive, don’t you think Alice?”

I turned to him with a grin and said, “Better than wonderland.”

“Well, I did say it was different from Underland.”

I walked forward and said,” Well, it is…”a rabbit with bat wings and a single horn like a unicorn horn flew by my face. I continued shocked not believing what I had just seen,” um, different.”

He gave me a cheerful grin oblivious of what had just passed us and said looking at his pocket watch,” Ah, good. The correct time now, watch doesn’t like the world between Underland. Makes it all fuu…..,”he looked at me like he had suddenly realized he was in the presence of a girl.” um…funky?”

I smirked at him and the way he had corrected himself,” Moving on now, why are we here?”

He stepped forward with his pointer finger up,” Oh, right. We are to find your death. But, uh, we might be teensy weensy bit lost.” His face sort of fell when he said that.