Wednesday, July 30, 2014

NERVOUS: if noticed in heir be alarmed and wary, for trouble is on its way.

Heyo! Yet another cliff hanger so sorry about that. I really think I like this story, it's fun to write, and it's fun to imagine the characters. Anyways, you know the drill, comment your opinion,suggestions, and any mistakes you noticed I made. All help is appreciated. I hope you enjoy and I will see you on Friday.

A.A.M.S
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I frowned at him ; saying in a annoyed tone,”What do you mean  it might be a problem?”
His ears twitched in distress again and he laughed nervously, “Problem? What problem? I don’t know any problem.”
“You know you’re really annoying sometimes. And your lying is awful by the way Heir, you should work on that.”
He laughed as he turned a corner and pulled me along with him, “I know, that is one thing everyone does say about me.”
I stumbled into a puddle getting my stockings soaking wet and yelled at him as he hurried along, “where on earth are we going?!”
Heir stopped suddenly and waved an arm about pointing at not really anything,” Not on earth! Underland, this is your world Alice, you should at least try and remember its name.”
I grumbled as he rushed off again pulling me along,” brain tumor, remember? I don’t exactly have very good memory, and what’s the point of remembering a name of a place that doesn’t even exist?”
He stopped suddenly and I stumbled into him, there was a flickering of blue lights on his face and against my eyes. Looking over to where the lights where coming from Heir said, “Right, this time, I’m going to face him.”
 I stared at the lights reading out loud, “The hatters tea party?”
He seemed to look nervous, maybe this was what he was so grim about? The faint sound of a modern song was coming from the place. I pulled him towards the place even though his face was completely white with fear. Grumbling I opened the door,”Oh come on, it can’t be that bad Heir.”
A wave of energy and sound hit me almost knocking me down. We walked into the place despite the pounding base that made my heart hurt.  The lights flashed to the beat of the song making me all fuzzy headed. I screamed at the top of my lungs over the blasting music, “It’s a bloody club?!”
 Heir gripped me and guided me through the sea of people dancing.  Finally after many hits from people’s elbows and a good amount of bruises we reached the stairs leading up to a glass walled room. As we walked up the stairs the stench of sweat left my nose and the smell of bitter tea replaced it. There were men and women who looked clean, ridiculously clean for this city. Their black suits crisp and their white shirt poking out of the top of them stainless. They stayed still as the tapping of heirs cane on the door rang in my ears. In my gut, something was wrong. I was excited, scared, confused, and miserable all at the same time. The door was opened by another body guard who looked like a gorilla in a suit he was so muscled. A dry crisp voice cut through the air, “Ah, my rival. Not that it is not good to see you but what are you doing in the reds territory?”
Heirs expression had gone completely cold, I couldn’t tell if that was anger, fear, or resentment. He responded equally dry, “You called?”

 I suddenly knew why I was so messed up, why I had mixed feelings about being here. Because the chair that voice was hiding behind turned around, and I was faced with my father.

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