Wednesday, July 23, 2014

WRAITH:children of the reapers.

Brief post today.But I've got to sort out Underland a bit more so I can write more. Hard to do that with such a hectic world. But there is always Pinterest to inspire me.:) Anyways,you know the drill,comment your opinions,suggestions,or any mistakes I made that you noticed. Every bit helps me with perfecting my grammar so I can use it to better the novels I'm working on at this moment. Hopefully there will be a new blog post on Friday. so,see you on Friday!

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I almost hit him in the jaw as he landed on top of me; I could feel his heartbeat on my chest. I yelled in surprise and felt a hand clap on my mouth. Heir shushed me and I heard a large shuffle. I heard something scrape on rock. A deep growl. I didn’t know I had breath still but found myself holding it as the great beast grew near and sniffed at the ground. The choking stench of rotting meat, along with the mixed stench of rotting fruit filled my nostrils. I looked at the terrifying beast, I only dared to breath in soft quiet breaths and those became shuddering ones. Around it the color drained from its surroundings, leaving a bleak grey surrounding it. The creature was a being with a large cloak over it. The cloak was grey and looked burned though that may have been stains and I thank the gods the cloak was long enough to cover its face-I don’t blame you Alice, I wouldn’t want to see that things face after your description-. Its breath sounded as though it was breathing through a respirator. And asked while a disgusting long claw scraped at a rock,” My prince… Where are you my prince? Lady Death is not in the mood to play around little prince.”
I felt Heir tense and I blinked at the beast. Its bony fingers stuck out of its cloaks sleeves. Its hood over its face swayed as it turned its head with quick movements I saw a little bit of its face even though I wished it would not. I wanted to puke it was so horrid, I will spare you the details. I dared not move for fear of having that thing look at me face on. Heir’s heart was pounding hard as the beast sniffed the air and looked at him. It seemed to be confused, unable to see us. I heard a crackle in the distance and the beasts head snapped the sounds way. With a flurry of stained and burned grey fabric the beast disappeared like it was being torn up. Only the faint smell of rot stayed for now. Heir breathed easily and got up off me. I was surprised with the sudden weight of me .Heirs face was much more concerned than his usual carefree one. He pushed his hair back and held out a hand to me. I grabbed it shakily and pulled myself up asking, “What …Was that?”
He looked concerned at the place where the beast had disappeared.”A wraith, child of a reaper. Trust me; their parents are even worse than them.”
I looked worried at him and began fearing Underland. I said, “That’s hard to imagine, Heir, who is this prince that thing was looking for? I would feel much better if I knew who he was.”

He looked at me with a silly smile although his eyes showed worry,” It’s not important Alice, he’s not important. Right now, we gotta get a move on before the wraith realizes what happened.”

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