I feel like I used "they" to much. any help on this problem is welcomed. Otherwise you know what to do ,comment your suggestions, opinions, and any mistakes I made that you noticed. New post on Friday so see you then.:)
A.A.M.S
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They shuffled over to me and I saw
two faces on each side of me. They were identical, both extremely scarred.
Their mouths moved at the exact time as each other, “Shall we begin? Hatter
says this one has caused him quite trouble. He said that this one is to be
dealt with delicately though.”
They looked at each other, “I
think he was joking though don’t you brother?” they smiled and showed off
bright white teeth that shown with their light blond hair, “Oh yes brother,
this one has caused hatter such trouble. Let’s do our best job, let’s be
brutal.”
They both picked up scalpels and
neared me, they moved completely in sync with each other. It was like they were
the same person. Although they were young I saw age in their eyes, must have
died long ago then. Which means they should be even more feared. I shook as I
felt a cool blade against my arm, “Please, don’t hurt me.”, I said fear in my
voice.
They giggled, “They all say that,
you know dear girl, to us, all screams sound the different. Like instruments
screams are, and we have a beautiful role to find each instrument and play it. To
learn how to change the tone, to make it ours.”
The coolness ran down my arm and
it turned into a fiery pain. I screamed as the scalpel sliced down my arm. ”Ooo
a high pitch one, your definitely a flute.”, they said in glee.
“I’m gonna fluting kill you!”, I yelled
at them.
Another slice across my arm made
me scream, it was like those scalpels were covered in fire. “Manners girl, one
your age should know them.” They said.
I screamed as they sliced my
stomach and cried in pain. “Oh no, tears brother! We better stop those; we can
have fun with her after we do our job.”
They put the scalpels down with a
soft sound and picked up what looked like an extremely thin ice pick. It neared
my eye as one of them held the eye lid open. I couldn’t even scream I was so scared;
they took a small hammer and brought it down on the spike. A sharp pain came to
me as the pick slid into my eye and into my brain.
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